Alerium SketchDump

I LOVE THIS CHAR SOOOO MUCH I really hope I win it ;o;
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About Alerium (AKA Ally)
Gender: Female
Species: Kirin
Age: Hnnngg idk how old Kirin can be but she's young
Personality:  Not very smart, curious + adventurous.  Very sweet and loving.
Story:  All Kirin are born to a god or goddess to assist and help them.  Alerium was born to the Goddess of life, Amryth.  Alerium's job is to scout ahead for places in need (Amryth goes with her often, because Alerium gets into trouble sometimes), and to make sure re-established habitats prosper (which Ally's good at since she's so kind and loves everything).  Amryth, although tired of having to get Ally's butt out of dragon caves or deep rivers, loves her very much.
One day, Alerium was out alone, scouting for lifeless lands.  As she found one, a hungry old dog started to chase her.  When Ally thought she wouldn't make it, something started to chase the dog off.  When she talked to him, she found out he was a goat-dog named Tarkun.  Ally fell in love with Tarkun, admiring everything about him (which annoys Tarkun and gets Gaddy angry).  

I really should draw more than this, but hnnng I might not win